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The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Introduction
My answer
The two pie charts explain that how much American Citizen spent products in 7 different factors in 1966 and 1996, at percentage.
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The two pie charts compare the expenses of US residents in two different years in seven categories from 1966 to 1996. The data is calibrated in percentage.
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The data is calibrated in percentage.
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US residents = American Citizen
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๊ฐ๊ฒฉ ์ง๋ถ์ spend ๋ณด๋จ pay
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ํผ์ผํธ๋ก ๋ํ๋ธ๋ค๋ as a percentage ํน์ in percentage.
General Trend
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This charts compare portion of consume, and during 30 years, there were a lot of change about the expense patterns. represently, there are the amount of computerโs consume and carโs consume.
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Overall, expenses on cars, restaurant and computers revealed positive trend, however, expenses on remaining items showed decrease in given period.
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Overall !!
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reveal - ๋๋ฌ๋๋ค.
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Reveal positive trend - ์์น์ธ๋ก ๋๋ฌ๋ฌ๋ค.
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Expense on N = N ์ ๋น์ฉ
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In given period
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N์ ๋น์ค - share of N
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Expense = spending
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Over the past ๊ธฐ๊ฐ = ์ง๋ ๊ธฐ๊ฐ ๋์
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๋ํ์ ์ผ๋ก === Represently == typically
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This charts compare the share of consumption, and there have been many changes in spending patterns over the past 30 years. A big change is typically the consumption of computers and cars.
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์ผ๋ง๋งํผ ์์นํ๊ณ ํ๋ฝํ๋ค. ๋์ ์์น์ธ๋ ์ด๋ฌ์ด๋ฌํ๊ณ , ํ๋ฝ์ธ๋ ์ด๋ฌ์ด๋ฌํ๋ค. ์ ๋๋ก์ ์ค๋ช
Detailed information 1
My answer
The most visualize things is that foodโs expense has been deceased from 44% to 14%, however the consumption of cars has inceased from 23 in 1996 years % to 45 years. The cost of computer and books also have similar aspects, the computer cost has increased, but the book cost has fell.
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It is clear that the largest ratio of American citizens spending went on foods and cars. On the other hand, computer and books had the lowest percentage in the chart in 1966 and 1996 respectively. However, the percentage for car rose to nearly double at 45% in 1996. Whereas, the proportion of spending on food fell from 44% in 1966 to only 14% in 1996.
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It is clear that
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Largest ratio
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On the other hand = Whereas = ๋ฐ๋ฉด์
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respectively ๋ก ๋ ๊ฐ์ง ์ฃผ์ ๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ๋ถํ๋ ์ฉ๋๋ก ์ฌ์ฉ ํ ์ ์์
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Rise (to) double = ๋ ๋ฐฐ ์ฌ๋๋ค.
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N% ์ = at N%
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Portion = ๋ถ๋ถ(์๋์ ์ธ ๋ถ๋ถ) , proportion = ratio ๋น์จ
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Similar
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reduction in N = n์ ๊ฐ์
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๊ฐ์ฅ ๋์ ๋๋ ๊ฒ = the most notable = the most noticeable
Detailed Information 2
My answer
However, the pertrol and furniture had less change between 1966 years and 1996 years. The others things, there has been increased in the use rate of restaurants about double score.
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The drastic change was seen for computers it stood at only one percent in 1966 but reached at 10% in 1996. There was a two fold increase on restaurant spending by American citizens, from 7% in 1966 to 14% in 1996. Whereas, a significant decrease was seen for books purchasing. Surprisingly, over a period there was no marked change in the ratio of petrol and furniture.
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Almost unchange
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Less๋ ๋น๊ต ์ฆ, ๋ ์์ ์ด๊ณ ๊ทธ๋ฅ ์์ ์ little ํน์ few
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Double ์ increase ๋ฑ ์ฆ/๊ฐ ๋์ฌ ๋ฐ๋ก ๋ค์ ๋ถ์ฌ์ฒ๋ผ ์ฌ์ฉํด์ผ ํ ๋ฏ
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์ด์ฉ๋ฅ usage rate = utilization